Comments for Freehand http://freehandzine.com A Literary Zine Thu, 04 Feb 2010 23:50:20 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.9.1 hourly 1 Comment on “the most meaningful job of my life” by Laura-Marie Taylor by Jen@ButterSword http://freehandzine.com/the-most-meaningful-job-of-my-life/comment-page-1/#comment-1173 Jen@ButterSword Thu, 04 Feb 2010 23:50:20 +0000 http://freehandzine.com/?p=227#comment-1173 What a great poem! I especially liked the image I got at the end of smoking and shooing little kids away. It made me remember smoking and hiding from the little kids I used to teach. What a great poem! I especially liked the image I got at the end of smoking and shooing little kids away. It made me remember smoking and hiding from the little kids I used to teach.

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]]> Comment on “The Most Common Man in the Multiverse” by Daniel Travis by Barking Cat http://freehandzine.com/the-most-common-man-in-the-multiverse-by-daniel-travis/comment-page-1/#comment-37 Barking Cat Fri, 01 May 2009 23:45:55 +0000 http://freehandzine.com/?p=154#comment-37 You have the right to be writing science fiction, but I will become a doctor before you. Your story is great. Well-paced, and intelligent without being too elitist. You have the right to be writing science fiction, but I will become a doctor before you.

Your story is great. Well-paced, and intelligent without being too elitist.

]]> Comment on “In the Lines of Our Palms” by Jimmy Pianka by Mike http://freehandzine.com/in-the-lines-of-our-palms-by-jimmy-pianka/comment-page-1/#comment-3 Mike Tue, 10 Feb 2009 22:59:16 +0000 http://freehandzine.com/?p=22#comment-3 I really enjoyed this piece; its theme reminds me of Pablo Neruda's "Poetry" but with a modern update. I feel in particular that the first and last lines are striking. If I had one suggestion it would be that the Kool Aid reference felt out of place to me. It's an odd analogy in a piece that references things that are less "pop" culture, like David and Pinnochio. I hope I get to read more of your work. Mike I really enjoyed this piece; its theme reminds me of Pablo Neruda’s “Poetry” but with a modern update. I feel in particular that the first and last lines are striking.

If I had one suggestion it would be that the Kool Aid reference felt out of place to me. It’s an odd analogy in a piece that references things that are less “pop” culture, like David and Pinnochio.

I hope I get to read more of your work.

Mike

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